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clean. pretty. love the personality on display. i cant get over posey trying to pay the reporter to shut up forever. what a perfect time and place to have a public crashout about your past, present and future relationship. your sprites were gorgeous and the artstyle was really pretty ansd full of personality, even when it got abstract. snappy and efficient writing and dialogue. good use of non-chronological storytelling. my only real complaints are that at the start i couldnt tell which sprite was the protagonist, and that every new scene i kept on having to hide the text box briefly to check what the rest of your gorgeous sprites looked like lol

This is a very satisfying read. I loved how it was funny and bleak throughout, without becoming ridiculous. Very realistic and heavy. The comic-strip style art was nice and fit the vibes of the story. Well done, would recommend.